Charmed Chaos
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Broken
As I watched
you slip away, it
all came back
to me why
you were never really mine
just a broken star.
Copyright©2017
Linda Lee Lyberg
Written for Day 27 of Shadorma November
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You always produce such amazing short poems! Just curious, shouldn’t the second line read “slipped” to be in past tense with the first line’s “watched”?
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I don’t think it should. Thank you though for the compliment. 😊
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Oh I think I see how you meant it now. My apologies
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No worries. Thanks for stopping by.
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Love the poem and the guitar pic!
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Thank you Walt!
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…just a broken star. You took my breath away with that last line Linda! Lovely!
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Thank you Penny! I so appreciate your comments. ❤️
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Love your stuff girl! 🙂
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😁
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