Linda, this is urgent, and beautiful. Can you throw some form of the word “fire” in there for me, to make it a Quadrille? Fiery, fired, firing…any form will do. Could be as easy as changing the first line to “fiery fervency.” I like the way it burns now, but needs “fire” to be the Q form.
Linda, this is urgent, and beautiful. Can you throw some form of the word “fire” in there for me, to make it a Quadrille? Fiery, fired, firing…any form will do. Could be as easy as changing the first line to “fiery fervency.” I like the way it burns now, but needs “fire” to be the Q form.
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Done! LOL- I got so caught up in it and had there, at one point.
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No worries. I have done that MANY times, when shaving down word count and massaging a poem. 😉 It’s a wonderful piece. Thank you!
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Yes, that’s exactly what happened. Thank you for the kind words.
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It’s difficult to supress one’s passions when they erupt as fiery flames. Beautifully executed💖
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Thank you! And yes, it certainly is.
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Some fires just don’t go out. A beautiful poem!
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That’s so true. Thank you!
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Smoke gets in your eyes. Or steam. 🙂 Also, quite a throwback video.
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Yes it does. And wasn’t that wild? I remembered the song, but not the artist. I would have never gotten it. One hit wonder I guess.
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Pretty much. Hell of a beginning, though!
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I know!!!
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To be SO passionate… sounds exhausting 😉
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Haha! Yes, to be sure. 😊
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Passion and desire burn like a forest fire out of control… Love it!
dwight
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Yes. Thank you Dwight!
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Such passion can be so draining. But I love this poem in its urgency.
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Yes. Thank you Toni!
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The fire is the reason that they say that love hurts.
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Yes. Thank you Bjorn.
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Suppressing one’s heart’s desires is like fighting a fire.
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Very true Frank. Thank you!
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“She wept with a fiery fervency’ …….and……..”searing flames of her heart’s desires”
I like how this begins with fighting fire with fire!
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Thank you! I appreciate your kind words.
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Hah! So much for suppressing. Hope she deals with that sorrowful shame.
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Yes thank you.
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