Charmed Chaos
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#Haiku: Dawn Breeze
Dawn whispers on wind
a soul stirs from night’s slumber
cool breeze on warm cheeks
©2018 Linda Lee Lyberg
Carpe Diem #1387 The Breeze at Dawn
Monday’s poem by Rumi:
The Breeze at Dawn
The breeze at dawn has secrets to tell you.
Don’t go back to sleep.
You must ask for what you really want.
Don’t go back to sleep.
People are going back and forth across the doorsill
where the two worlds touch.
The door is round and open.
Don’t go back to sleep.
© Rumi
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Sweet
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Thank you Drew. My, you’re up late. But perhaps not, for New York. The city that never sleeps right?
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Exactly. On the nights I post (I always post at midnight) I stay up for an hour answering comments.
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You are such a dear. I did my best to be timely with answering them as well. I think it’s admirable. I like that about you. Want you to know. So you posted tonight?
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Yeah, today is a tough one. My personal child abuse experience.
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I just read and commented.
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I know. Sniffle.
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We all go through experiences for a reason. I know mine has helped me to be empathetic, kind, and loving. The world needs more love. Doing my part. And you are too. 💛
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He can barely speak, so he nods. Thanks
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Felt the breeze on my cheeks.
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Thank you!
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I’d like to say that I’ve finally ‘arrived’.
Imagine my surprise when I click on your post and see the pic, and ‘Dawn whispers’…… If you read mine you’ll see what I mean. I’m honoured to think as you do.😌
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OMG- I can see it in the reader since I follow you, but it won’t go to your blog…That’s so cool. I love it. Great minds, Viv, great minds! 🙂
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I’m so honoured. …and chuffed !😆😆😆
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🙂
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This made me feel so warm. Great job!
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Thank you. Happy you enjoyed it.
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Thank you!
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