Charmed Chaos
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Exiled
As the Dark Angel fell,
banished from heaven
the universe
ripped and unzipped
a hole through the
cloudy night sky.
Raining down tears from God
on his vile
cloven hooves
he’s forever exiled
and will never again view
his home up above on high.
©2018 Linda Lee Lyberg
d’Verse Peot’s Pub- Quadrille #54 Zip It!
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Excellent writing and the picture was inspirational. Perfect match! 🙂
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Oh, MY. So a powerful visual, and incredible words to match.
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Thank you!
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Reblogged this on The Militant Negro™.
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That’s sharp fall into exile by the Dark Angel ~ The universe is raining down tears of sadness ~
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Yes, thank you Grace.
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“the universe
ripped and unzipped”
I love that.
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Thank you. I appreciate your kind words.
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You have this wonderful way with words that create vivid .images. Well done m y friend! ☺❤
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Thank you Walt. 😊Appreciate your words!
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You’re welcome ☺
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The dark angel cast to earth. I’ll think Heaven rejoiced and all on earth mourned, knowing he had but a short time. Woe
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Yes…I loved that image and had to use it. ❤️
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For sure. Unzipped the seam of heaven and let him out.
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Yes! 🙂
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Love the zipper in the sky,,dropping him through the hole to Earth! Been stirring up trouble ever since!!
dwight
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Yes, for sure! Thanks Dwight! Always love seeing you here
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Thanks Linda!
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Awesome job!
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Thanks much, truly.
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You are most welcome!
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Wonderfully written, great visuals and an overwhelming feeling of sadness.
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Thank you Kaylaann, appreciate your kindness be words.
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Bravo. I love the way you do dark.
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Thank you!
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Wow!!! Great piece
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Thank you!
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The image is hauntingly beautiful. Your quadrille feels like the prelude to a very interesting story.
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Thank you!
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