Salt
Posted on May 20, 2018
by Linda Lee Lyberg
37 Comments
I am the restless ocean, you a tempest storm
churning our waters into a whirlwind of wants
plunging us into murky depths of desire
where we linger, and soon surrender
to that which our fates have conspired.
The ocean, the storm, water with no form,
when you taste salty sweat on glistening skin
as we continue to swirl into a luscious spin
spellbound with one another.
The flooding begins and we, now immersed
in this passionate play so well rehearsed.
All that remains is the dull ache of pain
in the aftermath of our amorous reign
which leaves our souls tainted and stained.
For, what is love but a permanent drowning
of the crowning jewel of alone
as we rise from the turbulent waters,
me, a pillar of crumbling salt
pummeling me into sparkling dust
as we merge together into one.
Wow Linda! Your writing is getting better and better. My mouth is hanging open. ( and a naughty thought: ” her fella’s got some skills!” LOL! )
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LOL! Thanks Vivian- you’re too kind.And he does! 🙂
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Lucky girl!😄
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Indeed I am.
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What a wonderful poem with such a strong ending of merging into one!
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Thank you- I really appreciate your kind words!
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Love this perfect finale
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Thank you Andrew!
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You have said it well.
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Thank you for the lovely words.
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Reblogged this on The Militant Negro™.
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Thank you- Happy Sunday!
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wowzers! lol I’ve been waiting to find a piece I liked so much to say that. lol i love the tension and the resolution in the end. ::kissing my finger tips:: MUAH
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Oh my, thank you. Smiling here!
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Reblogged this on Jayne.press and commented:
❤ love this piece!
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Thank you!
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The symbolism of sea is such a strong one… i think it could be written about everything
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Yes, so true. Thank you Bjorn.
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Had to laugh at Vivian’s comment. The poem tells it all, and very well!
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Haha! Thank you so much! Appreciate you stopping by.
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Your metaphor, as I read it,
was as “Crushing to Combine” as tempering steel into sculpture.
Wow!
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Thank you for your kind words. Truly appreciated.
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You made the ocean come alive with your words!
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Thank you!
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Lovely poem!
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Thank you!
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This is absolutely exquisite! 😍😍😍😍
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Thank you! I appreciate your wonderful words.
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You should be writing romance novels ☺
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Thank you Walt- you’re too kind!
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You’re very welcome ☺
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😘❤️
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Striking use of metaphor.
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Thank you.
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Very well done!
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Thank you!
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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