Quickening of Love
Posted on September 10, 2018
by Linda Lee Lyberg
31 Comments
Beautiful harmony of two hearts released
the quiet peace after the feast
a dulling of tender senses
with both hypnotized and defenseless.
©2018 Linda Lee Lyberg
Photo by Jon Tyson on Unsplash
d’Verse Quadrille #64
whew! ❤
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Thanks Penny!
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Love love love your internal and subtle rhyming here!
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Thank you!
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I like the connection between “feast” and “ravenous beast”.
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Thank you Frank.
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Excellent internal rhymes in this!
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Thank you Toni. I appreciate your lovely words.
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Admiring the change of pace- from quickening to the quiet peace and calm.
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Thank you Grace. I was hoping to achieve that.
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Brilliantly descriptive!
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Thank you!
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the quiet after the calm lulls my heart gently, I like the breathlessness of your poem, gives my heart a quickening
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Thank you Gina.
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I love your phrases Linda. Thoughtless recklessness , the quite peace after the feast… Just stunning! 🙂❤️
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Thank you Walt. 😊❤️
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You’re welcome Linda 🙂❤️
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😊❤️
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Nice pacing…captures the essence of the moment (and beyond).
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Thank you for your kind words.
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You are very welcome
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Beautifully eloquent write! ❤️ I love “a quickening of breath and the fall-ing with a flash of pale flesh
thoughtless recklessness”… the way you emphasize the idea/image of falling by inserting a hyphen in between is genius! 😍😍
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Thank you Sanaa.
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Ah, this is good. I always love a sensual verse, with its quickened pace and the feasting image.
I miss “dulling of tender senses”. 🙂
-HA
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Thank you HA. I’m pleased you enjoyed my words.
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This is how it feels…
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Yes! Thanks Bjorn.
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The choice of “quickening” so perfect as it’s all about potential and energy.
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Thank you Victoria.
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Very nice, the quickening feast…falling into passionate love, then the slow digesting that stills the ravenous beast into the calm beauty of deeper love.
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Thank you kindly. Happy you stopped by.
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