Chasing Shade
Posted on October 9, 2018
by Linda Lee Lyberg
18 Comments
Vibrant Summer with your rush of green leaves and turquoise skies
sweltering dog days chasing the shade amongst windswept dunes
make haste now, dance the dance for Autumn is coming soon
As fall tiptoes into its season the wind eases, time slows
maple leaves turn to burnished bronze and brilliant gold
whispering to earth mother, rest now for time to rebirth
as we drift down into your arms, with warmth we will hold
and here we will lay and become next years fodder,
sheltering tiny seeds for the new Spring growth.
©2018 Linda Lee Lyberg
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I do like all of this, but especially “time slows,” which eases right into the transition that follows.
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Thank you Ken. I feel time slows in Autumn. Glad you liked it!
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This is as beautiful as the fall colours themselves…..dreamy and burnished gold!
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Thank you Sherry!
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This is lovely Linda ☺❤
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Thank you Walt. 😊❤️
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You’re more than welcome my dear friend. ☺❤
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❤️
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Lovely! I like the rhythm of this, the peacefulness of it. Fall does lead into wonderful things!
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Thank you Toni!
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This is wonderfully serene and peaceful ❤️ I love how you describe the slow and gradual transition to Autumn especially; “maple leaves turn to burnished bronze and brilliant gold.”😍
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Thank you Sanaa.
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I like the way the pace slows down from summer to autumn, Linda, and you’ve conveyed the changing colours so well. I love the lines:
‘sweltering dog days chasing the shade amongst windswept dunes
make haste now, dance the dance for Autumn is coming soon’
and
‘As fall tiptoes into its season the wind eases, time slows
maple leaves turn to burnished bronze and brilliant gold’.
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Thank you for your kind words Kim. I’m pleased you enjoyed it.
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Oh, so light and peaceful — the change in season is beautifully expressed in this imagery. I love the colors and the corresponding warmth of your words.
-HA
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Thank you kindly HA.
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Nature and autumn are so beautiful and so is this Linda!
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Thank you so much!
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