Musings on Life, Love, and Linguine-Poetry & Writing
Once in the mirror I saw
a sepia inked version
pleading to me
for change like a beggar on the street.
So I picked up my pen and paper
composed a poem to the real me.
Now, I live and breath…
in vivid technicolor.
©2021 Linda Lee Lyberg
dVerse Quadrille: https://dversepoets.com/2019/01/14/ch-ch-ch-ch-changes-quadrille-71/
Just beautiful.
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Thank you De. I appreciate your kind words.
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Love this! I hope you continue to live your life in vivid technicolor, Linda! ^_^
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Thank you Jade!
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nice! face to face
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Thanks!
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We both got the same image — “for change like a beggar on the street”
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Haha!
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I missed the clear shot at panhandling for change. Perfect.
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Thanks q!
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Beautiful!
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Thank you!
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Reblogged this on davidbruceblog #2 and commented:
Well written and well done.
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Thank you!
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Coloring the drab with brush and paint or with colorful words. Isn’t it nice to have that option:?!
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Yes! Thank you.
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Technicolor in our monotone world sounds joyful Linda…
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Yes, so much so. Thanks Rob!
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Such an excellent poem. Proves that good things come in small packages. The beggar on the street simile is made fresh by the paucity of color in the sepia reflections. You even managed to use vivid technicolor in a way that takes advantage of the familiarity of the phrase to add a faint drumroll to your beautiful jump into authenticity. Lots of interesting stuff going on beneath that surface! Also it makes a nice ‘ars poetica’ poem.
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Thank you so much for your insight.
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Such a positive affirmation to: I live and breath…
in vivid technicolor.
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Thank you Grace!
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Lovely 🤗
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Thank you!
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🤗my pleasure
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Absolutely stunning! ❤❤❤
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Thank you Sanaa!
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Love it! We should all follow suit.
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Thank you V.J. I appreciate your kind words!
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You are so welcome.
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To listen to your voice and do something about it – is not something everyone does.
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That’s true. Thank you for reading.
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I like the description of looking in the mirror in the first half.
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Thanks Frank.
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Ah… this happened to me too… and I guess the only answer to a sepia face is a new vivid technicolor life 🙂 Bravo!
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Thank you!
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So much better with color… sepia is wonderful word though
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Yes, I am fond of the word as well. Thanks Bjorn.
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Beautiful you can see all of the colors and bring them to life.
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Thank you kindly Drew.
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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