Musings on Life, Love, and Linguine-Poetry & Writing
Somewhere…
There is a place
Shed tears become raindrops
Golden sunshine’s gleam never burns
Your face
Dark grief is overcome with joy
Colorful flowers bloom
Fed by fresh rain
…Somewhere
©2021 Linda Lee Lyberg
Author’s Note: I’m in a Butterfly Cinquain mood!
Go Dog Go Cafe: https://godoggocafe.com/2019/01/22/tuesday-writing-prompt-challenge-january-22-2019/
dVerse Poetics: https://dversepoets.com/2019/01/22/shed-some-light-on-this-today/
Real Toads: http://withrealtoads.blogspot.com/2019/01/the-tuesday-platform-departed.html
Loving this! So positive and full of hope. I’d like to reach somewhere some day😊
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Yes, me too!
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Oh those tears, Linda. I love that you have ‘Shed’ and Fed’ rhyming at the start of the lines and the circular feel conveyed by ‘Somewhere’!
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Thank you kindly Kim. We all come full circle eventually!
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Lovely words, Linda, so gentle. Funny but the first (and only) poem I ever submitted to the real toads prompt began with the exact words you use. I got bawled out for plagiarism, a couple of abusive comments, and the link was removed. That’s why I’ve never been back. Must have been a bad day for someone.
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Wow- What a story. That’s a real shame. Thank you Jane. I know about the Beatle’s song, There’s a Place, but none other. 🙂
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Somewhere from West Side Story. It isn’t even exactly the same:
There’s a place for us, somewhere,
a place for us etc etc.
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That’s right!!! LOL. Thanks for the refresher.
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The Stephen Sondheim Nazis must have been off duty when you posted your poem 🙂
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Haha! Must have. But if they do come after me and kick me out, I’ll be in your good company. 😉
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We’ll set up our own refugee group 🙂
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Perfect!😊
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What a lovely turn to green from the rain… a desert dweller knows the importance of rain
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Yes, we do and we cherish every day we get it. Thanks Bjorn.
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This is so calming to read.
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Thank you Megha.
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It’s a wonderful transformation when “Dark grief is overcome with joy”.
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Thank you Frank.
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Clever shaping – I like the possibility of a place that turns downs to ups. “Somewhere” – so hopeful.
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Thank you V.J. Yes, it is hopeful!
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a place where teardrops sustain colorful flowers, that gorgeous wisteria, i like the dreamlike quality where sorrow turns to joy
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Thank you so much!
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You are welcome.
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I agree with Jane, there’s a faint echo of the West Side Story song here for me, but you make it your own, lushly optimistic.
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Thank you Sarah!
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This was a gorgeous write Linda, and I love the shape of the poem! The photo is glorius. Really enjoyable post overall… 🙂
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Thank you Rob!
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Somewhere.. And when it’s my time, I’ll go there too.. Very touching piece.
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Thank you kindly.
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I vote that you keep the mood going – like a little vacation visiting here 🙂
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Haha! Thank you Jilly! It does have a nice feel to it.
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Well-written and very encouraging, Linda!
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Thank you Charley. I appreciate you stopping by.
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You are welcome!
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A lovely poem but full of sadness. Funny, I have never met any “line” Nazis at Toads, only nice people.
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Thank you Toni. I never have either- everyone has been very welcoming.
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I am glad of that. I would miss you if went elsewhere.
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Not even considering it! 😊
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🙂
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Somewhere….dark grief is overcome with joy. Beautiful, Linda.
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Thank you Sherry!
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“Somewhere”: That word encapsulates so much. 🙂
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Thank you HA.
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Shedding Any Shadow
of Darkness for me
These Days
Is As Close
As A Three
Minute Three
Foot Space of
Two Feet in a Spiral
Dance or Perhaps
Now Just Raising
One Arm to the Heavens
Within As Bio-Feedback
of Thousands of Miles
of Spiraling Dance
Will Automatically
BRinG A HoME NoW
oF Joy To Give And
Share TotAlly Free
Sort of the way
Words Will
Dance too
When
Flow
is the Feather
And WinD oNE..:)
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😊
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:)!
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I love how you turn things around. Lovely language.
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Thank you!
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Beautiful poem and picture.
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Thank you Sadje.
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Welcome
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How beautiful, positive, warm and reassuring this poem is.
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Thank you!
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Looking this, Linda.
One of two places I’ve found:
1. Where lost things are (kudos to the new Mary Popins movie we took youngest granddaughter); or
2. Somewhere over the rainbow. That I’ve also found (search my other blog).
Lovely, Linda
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Thank you!
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I love the idea of tears becoming raindrops! Exquisite! ❤
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Thank you kindly Sanaa.
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What sweet sentiments you have here Linda! Great imagery… where suns rays don’t burn your face!
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Thank you Dwight!
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I hear strands of West Side Story in your opening line, and what heartbreaking hope amidst despair you portray with the rest, Linda! Beautiful!
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Thank you Frank!
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I like that place. And the distant rhyme of shed and fed.
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Thank you! Happy you stopped by.
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Lovely, positive–beautiful thoughts of a somewhere.
In regard to the comments above, I did think of the song “Somewhere” from West Side Story–but just in the way that things tend to remind me of songs–not plagiarized. 🙂 Audra McDonald does a beautiful version of the song.
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Thanks Merril!
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wonderful words beautifully crafted.
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Thank you!
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Pleasure
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thank you Chuck! xoxoxo
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Happy to share this with followers, My Dear!
xoxoxo
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😘
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