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On Hope’s Wings
On hope’s wings comes the new birth of a season
As green life bursts forth, a time for fresh seeding
With every turn, turn, there is profound reason
While we pause, reflecting on life, and heeding.
As green life bursts forth, a time for fresh seeding
With joy we plant luscious fruits for tomorrow
While we pause, reflecting on life and heeding
With rich dirt on our hands, we bury our sorrow.
With joy we plant luscious fruits for tomorrow
Waiting for the new sprouting seeds to flower
With rich dirt on our hands, we bury our sorrow
For spring is the time for joy and golden hours.
Waiting for the new sprouting seeds to flower
With every turn, turn, there is profound reason
For spring is the time for joy and golden hours
On hope’s wings comes the new birth of a season.
©2021 Linda Lee Lyberg
dVerse Poetics
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Coming full circle here in this pantoum is absolutely perfect for the content as well as the form. I love that first and last line! This flows so well within the form and relating to Eccliastes.
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Thank you Lillian!
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Well said, Linda. A nice pantoum.
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A beautiful poem.
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Thank you kindly Sadje. I’m happy you enjoyed it.
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My pleasure 😇
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Nice line: “With rich dirt on our hands, we bury our sorrow.” It seems good to bury sorrow in rich dirt.
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Yes, thank you Frank!
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Spring seems far away here; 1-3 inches of snow predicted for tomorrow. March seems to be in a bad mood this year! Love your thoughts of Spring, however!
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Thank you so very much. Wishing you warm days soon!
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Lovely poem about upcoming Spring season.
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Thank you so much. Sorry for the late reply- this ended up in my SPAM. Happy you enjoyed it!
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I am looking forward to the new season – spring. Really like your pantoum with:
For spring is the time for joy and golden hours
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Thank you Grace!
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perfection Linda, in form and theme! a wonderful moving read and full of reflection, each phrase heavy with metaphors but bringing much light to the reader – i enjoyed your classic take on the pantoum and weaving in Lillian’s prompt effortlessly
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Thank you Gina.
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There is an undeniable joy that accompanies the onset of Spring – you capture it well.
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Thank you! One of my favorite times fo year, especially here in Arizona.
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Sorry I am missing it! Maybe next year.
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I hope so!
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Me too!
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Spring is always a time of renewal. And the pantoum form is perfect for expressing that. (K)
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Thank you.
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I love the way you have used the form to describe the return of hope while planting the seeds.
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Thank you Bjorn.
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The miracle of seeds is an amazing thing, and your poem celebrates this splendidly Linda!
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Thank you Rob.
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