Charmed Chaos
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Drowning in You
And if I should fall into the abyss of you
would you follow me down and together
we cascade into a waterfall of love?
As we swirl
in the blue shimmering waters
caught in this whirlpool of emotions
raging in our loins, drowning
in each other’s eyes
will you take my hand and
never let go?
©2021 Linda Lee Lyberg
dVerse Poetics: Cascade
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I like the description in “waterfall of love”.
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Thank you Frank! Hope you are well.
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Much passion in this Linda, and I like the sense of being almost helplessly caught in it. Nice write!
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Thank you Rob!
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Hopefully the answer is yes. Love this part: we cascade into a waterfall of love.
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Thank you Grace.
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Wow! Love it’
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Thank you!
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take my hand and never let go? love the feeling you have created in this cascading pool of words Linda
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Thank you Gina.
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This is so very very passionate… love it.
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Thank you Bjorn.
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The abyss, the fall, the whirlpool — love is a dangerous game.
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Indeed it is.. Thanks Amaya.
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