Musings on Life, Love, and Linguine-Poetry & Writing
Taimi crawls beneath the cascading willow to mourn her lover in peace
imagining the slender weeping leaves are his fingers on her skin
Closing her eyes she yearns to be in his strong arms again
Each day she comes to the magnificent tree watering the ground with her tears
she tells the ancient one her magical wishes, hopes, and secret dreams
And then one day as she is crying, she hears a whispering,
from the bent and aged willow comes a deep voice, offering
a panacea for her painful grief
Dear Taimi each day you come with your sea-salt tears,
I hear your grieving anguish, and I want to ease your fears
I will grant your astounding wish, the one you speak each day
so be still my little one and sleep safe, within my gnarled roots
when you wake you’ll be a tiny sapling with bright green shoots
And to this day, if you listen when you are passing by,
you’ll hear soft ancient sighs and joyous laughter float on high
from the old and young willows swaying in the summer breeze
©2021 Linda Lee Lyberg
Author’s Note: Today Kim is hosting at the Garden and has asked us to write a poem based on Tree Mythology. We can choose from a list she provided, one of our favorites, or create a story of our own. I chose to do the latter. On a side note, the name Taimi means ‘sapling, young tree’ in Finnish.
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What an original story, Linda – and it has a willow in it! As you know, I have a willow in my garden, which I love very much. It is also appropriately romantic and sad.
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Thank you Kim!
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How lovely, to be born as a small sapling with green shoots!
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Yes, indeed! Thank you Sherry.
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Romantic Linda, and a bit frightening. Willows are beautiful, but to look at – not be! But still a wonderful myth!
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Thank you Rob.
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What a gorgeously original and thrilling tale, Linda!! 😍😍😍
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Thank you Sanaa!
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This is a wonderful and bittersweet story…. I can see the willow crying
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Thank you so much Bjorn.
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I’m all for willowing my weeper. Just to have such tresses!
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Haha! Yes!
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And thank you for the read!
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Love it… Beautiful story
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Thank you Susie.
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Excellent And An Enjoyable Read For Me.
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Thank you kindly!
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An enchanting story indeed, tenderly told.
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Thank you Rosemary.
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Linda, Lovely words and you really drew a beautiful picture with your words. Pat
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Thank you Pat, truly.
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Magical! A tale well woven!
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Thank you!
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