Charmed Chaos
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Tangled
“A deep woman is a universe to explore, she is very challenging; but she is life.”
― Lebo Grand
My scorching soul like the sun set aflame
when roving hands echoing hot desires
playing music on sweet skin without shame
feeding our hunger, stoking inner fires
until flames consume us, burning brighter.
Passion is greedy, always wanting more
with flesh quivering as never before
we melt, coming together in white heat
two hearts screaming with a tremendous roar
when we’re tangled and trapped in damp bed sheets.
©2021 Linda Lee Lyberg
dVerse Poets Pub: More Dizain
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Truly seductive piece. Love it!!!
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Thank you Beckie!
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Always a pleasure, Linda! 💕
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Nice description of passion ever wanting more. I like the phrase “tangled and trapped” in the last line.
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Thank you Frank!
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Oh my! I need a cold shower! Very provocative and evocative piece! Wonderful use of the dizain form!
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Thank you. I’m happy you enjoyed it!
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Wonderfully written! 🙂
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Thank you!!
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You’re welcome! 😉
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Well executed Dizain Linda. Engaging read – excellent job.
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Thank you Rob.
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So happy you pointed this one out. Wouldn’t want to miss this steamy write.
The images and perfect word selection made this a great one.
Loved this. Thanks for pointing it out
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Smiling. I thought you might enjoy it! Thank you Drew, truly.
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Oh, hot stuff! Well done. I particularly liked ‘playing music on sweet skin’.
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Thank you Rosemary!
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Truly seductive and hot! I really enjoyed reading your poem. Keep up the great work! I’m pretty new to blogging and would love it if you could follow my blog.
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Thank you. I’ll take a look.
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