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Through the filigreed golden veil of dawn
October drifts in on a seductive breeze
kissing the wavering vibrant leaves,
hovering, unsure of what hues will please
the fickleness of the autumn season.
Mornings fresh and brisk evoke, a yearning
for my tattered sweater, wrapped in its folds
where the faintest scent of last night’s fire
warms my soul in the fleeting cold.
Each afternoon in the leaf scattered garden
dappled shadows grace the etched stone walls
taunting the geckos to come out and play
before the abrupt ending of a perfect fall day.
As twilight’s brush paints the western sky
with an artist’s brilliant palette
blending red, orange, purple and yellow
on the canvas of a deepening turquoise sky
the sun in sadness relents, and sighs a long goodbye.
©2021 Linda Lee Lyberg
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Beautiful! Luv 💓 the imagery of the veil.
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Thank you!
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A beautiful poem, with such lovely and vivid word picture painted.
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Thank you Sadje!
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You’re welcome Linda!
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The concept of Autumn hues trying to please us is delightful!
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Thank you!
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The entire piece was beautiful but that last stanza was perfect
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Thank you for your wonderful words Drew.
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Beautiful Linda Lee, beautiful! (I am now calling you by your Edgar Allen Poe name) 🙂
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😂 thank you Rob!
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I am absolutely in love with your opening lines, Linda! ❤️ Such poetic brilliance and the use of color in “blending red, orange, purple and yellow on the canvas of a deepening turquoise sky,” really gives one an insight into the feelings Autumn evokes. Thank you so much for writing to the prompt 🙂
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Thank you for your lovely thoughts Sanaa! ❤️
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Stunning, Linda… Truly, the imagery is stunning!! 💗
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Thank you kindly Beckie!
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You are most certainly welcome, Linda. 🤗
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So much melancholy beauty in this piece.
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Thank you Rommy!
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“a yearning for my tattered sweater” just a longing for that feeling of warmth, the comfortable embrace, even the smell of last night’s fire. Has a definite feeling of fall.
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Thank you so much.
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I heard that sigh and felt that goodbye rolling over my skin, full of winter dreams. Love all the scents, colors, and the mind-pictures they birth.
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Thank you Magaly!
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The bonfire, the sweater – comforting and yes, Autumn can bring great joy and … disappointment. Last year the leaves all fell off before they turned color! I think this year will be glorious.
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The bonfire, the sweater – comforting and yes, Autumn can bring great joy and … disappointment. Last year the leaves all fell off before they turned color! I think this year will be glorious.
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Wonderful! We don’t get much in the way of changing leaves here in the desert, but I dream. Thanks Margaret.
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Hi Margaret- sorry for the late response. This was in SPAM and just saw it. yes, I know what you mean. We get very little color here in Mesa, AZ, so I have to dream!
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thanks Chuck !❤️
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Always my pleasure sharing your words!!
xoxo
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Thanks Chuck!
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You’ve captured the feeling of Autumn so brilliantly..i love the colours
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Thank you!
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I was totally immersed in your poem. Goodbye to autumn and the trembling breath as I await winter. Lovely.
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Thank you Vivian!
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A beautiful picture! (And the colourful photo is pretty too.)
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Thank you Rosemary.
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Beautiful Linda! you made me love October and Autumn even more intensely.
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Thank you Toni!
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This is full of gorgeous imagery, Linda!
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Thank you kindly.
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Gorgeous imagery, Linda. I feel immersed in October and it’s loveliness.
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Thank you!
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Sincerely.
Don’t know what to say.
You cool💃💋
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Thank you!
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