Musings on Life, Love, and Linguine-Poetry & Writing
Another day ends as lavender twilight descends
A gentle breeze whispers with mockingbird’s trills
As the vibrant tangerine sun sinks and transcends
The brisk evening air tumbles, bringing cold chills
A gentle breeze whispers with mockingbird’s trills
Singing with his broken heart of melancholic love
The brisk evening air tumbles, bringing cold chills
As his voice carries through green boughs above
Singing with his broken heart of melancholic love
I’ve lived the agony of heartache he’s been through
As his voice carries through green boughs above
Crooning his sorrow in hues of dark indigo blue
I’ve lived the agony of heartache he’s been through
When vibrant tangerine sun sinks and transcends
He croons his sorrow in hues of dark indigo blue
Another day ends as lavender twilight descends.
©2020 Linda Lee Lyberg
Author’s note: I haven’t written a pantoum in while, and I love the form.
Linda Lee Lyberg is a wife, mother, artist, published poet and author. She resides in Mesa, AZ with her husband Pete (aka The Big Viking) of 24 years, and her dog, Ricky Bobby. Linda writes various forms of poetry, as well as short stories. You can read more of her works at: charmedchaos.com
and purchase anthologies containing her work here: Amazon Author Page
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I just spend quite a bit of time repeating the phrase “sun sinks and transcends”… aloud. So long that certain members of my family began to stare and wonder. What can I say? I love the sound the words make–brilliant choice–and the imagery they invoke.
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Thank you Magaly.
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Beautiful.
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Thank you!
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This is breathtakingly beautiful, Linda! ❤️ The Pantoum is a difficult form to achieve and you have done wonders with it! 😍 I especially love; “The brisk evening air tumbles, bringing cold chills/As his voice carries through green boughs above.”
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Thank you Sanaa!❤️
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Absolutely lovely
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Thank you.
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You are very welcome
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This is a form of poetry I will have to try. I love the lavender and tangerine. I can almost smell this poem.
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Thank you kindly.
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I too am with Magaly…”sun sinks and transcends” is such a magical phrase.
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Thank you so much Susie.
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A fragrant form 🙂
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☺️
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I love the pantoum form too (though haven’t written one in ages). You’ve chosen a beautiful subject for this one – and although the picture is not necessary for appreciation of the poem, it is a very lovely illustration of it.
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Thank you Rosemary.
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This photo is breathtaking! Great post!
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Thank you so much.
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I love your beautiful pantoum, Linda, it is one of my fave forms.
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Thank you so much Sherry.
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Such beautiful imagery and I love how you came from beginning to end in a circle
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Thank you for your lovely thoughts.
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Love your words and feelings expressed here!! A great capture of that broken heart longing and going through the sorrow!!
xoxo 💖🌹😊
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Thank you Chuck. ❤️
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Have a happy day!! 😊💖
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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A lavishly luscious poem!
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Thank you!
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This gave me chills! ‘He croons his sorrow in hues of dark indigo blue’ is so beautiful.
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Thank you so much.
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