Musings on Life, Love, and Linguine-Poetry & Writing
“I can write the saddest poem of all tonight. I loved her, and sometimes she loved me too.”
― Pablo Neruda
Here on the sea glass littered sandy shore
Only gulls can hear my anguished cries over the roar
So I burden the sapphire ocean with wrenching sorrows,
Mingling my blinding tears with its briny waters.
I scream at the emptiness your leaving has created,
I mourn for our perfect love now crumbling, eroded
With each harsh bitter word and acrid falling tear
The waves pull me in, take me farther from shore.
And here is where I will remain, forever more.
©2020 Linda Lee Lyberg
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Also linking to dVerse Poets Pub for OLN where I am hosting tonight. Come share a poem with us! The pub opens at 3PM EST.
Linda Lee Lyberg is a wife, mother, artist, published poet and author. She resides in Mesa, AZ with her husband Pete (aka The Big Viking) of 24 years, and her dog, Ricky Bobby. Linda writes various forms of poetry, as well as short stories. You can read more of her works at: charmedchaos.com
and purchase anthologies containing her work here: Amazon Author Page
Such sorrow and sadness.
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Yes, thank you Sadje.
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You’re welcome Linda.
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sad, but beautifully penned, Linda. ❤
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Thank you Penny.
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The sea is a perfect companion in any mood.
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Thank you Rosemary.
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So sad, but beautiful. The imagery is so emotional.
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Thank you.
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Oh, the ache of, “I burden the sapphire ocean with wrenching sorrows,”
Your poem is resonant and raw, Linda.
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Thank you Lisa.
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Broken and worn – both your title and the end result of your words.
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Thank you Ken.
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This is exquisitely drawn, Linda! 💝 I resonate with; “Mingling my blinding tears with its briny waters.” The sea knows and shares so much. Thank you for adding your voice to the prompt! 🙂
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Thank you for your kind words Sanaa.
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Beauty and anguish mixed to perfection.
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Thank you so much.
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I can feel the sorrow but also how the sea polish its sharp edges like that sea-glass.
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Yes, thank you Bjorn.
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There is such sadness in this poem, Linda, which is illuminated by the sparkling sea glass and the sapphire ocean. I love how you echo the sounds of the beach with the anguished cry. A tragic ending.
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Thank you, Kim.
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I’m struck by the contrast of the beauty of the speaker’s surroundings and the depth of their heartbreak.
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Thank you Rommy.
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This is indeed a beautiful poem, even if one is not familiar with “sea glass”. The being splintered, to be found in amounts on the shore, in colours, sharp, though steadily weakened, for finally to be washed away. Ai believe aI have been there. And you create a mood by image alone, not by emotional adjectives and adverbs. Ai am impressed, to state it as it is.
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Thank you.
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oh the anguish, the sea often mirrors our moods, well written!
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Thank you.
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So heart touching indeed! Visited the pub after long and it certainly felt like home 🙂
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Wonderful! And thank you.
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A soul can drown in the grief of breakups and endings. I can see the speaker being pulled into the depths, losing hope… feeling like there is no way out.
Perfect quote, too.
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Thank you Magaly.
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I like your comparison of “blinding tears” and “briny waters”.
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Thank you Frank.
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kaykuala
The waves pull me in, take me farther from shore.
And here is where I will remain, forever more.
How very sad, unrequited love brought to its knees!
Hank
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Thank you Hank.
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A sad poem but an intensely beautiful poem. The sea, the tears, the sea glass – the giving up of hope. I know just how the narrator feels. Perfect quote as well.
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Thank you Toni. Sending you comfort and peace.
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Thank you Linda
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Beautiful, but so sad!
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Thank you.
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A beautiful tragedy Linda!
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Thank you.
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Reblogged this on Where Genres Collide Traci Kenworth YA Author & Book Blogger and commented:
So sad.
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Oh Wow, one of those if I wanna die here is how I’ll do it. I have a couple in recurring thought (they return, don’t they–especially when we are feeling down, I hardly ever write of those times), well really three. Going out in the ocean too far to swim back isn’t for me.
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Thanks Jim.
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Thank you.
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Heart-searing pathos, with enticing imagery, and a tone that screams! Wonderful write, Linda!
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Thank you Frank.
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🙂
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Tragic and beautiful at the same time.
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Thank you.
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