Musings on Life, Love, and Linguine-Poetry & Writing
“All things that have form eventually decay.” -Orochimaru”
― Masashi Kishimoto
There beneath thorny brambles
a tuft of soft fur devoid of life
a scattering of chalky bones
all that’s left-
remnants of a tiny soul
With those final dying breaths,
did her mind hasten her away
to the flowering meadow
where she once played?
©2020 Linda Lee Lyberg
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Linda Lee Lyberg is a wife, mother, artist, published poet and author. She resides in Mesa, AZ with her husband Pete (aka The Big Viking) of 24 years, and her dog, Ricky Bobby. Linda writes various forms of poetry, as well as short stories. You can read more of her works at: charmedchaos.com
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That’s very tender, Linda.
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Thank you Sarah.
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Beautiful.
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Thank you Sherry.
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Tender and poignant, Linda! Hopefully its tiny soul is in a better place now 💝💝
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Yes, let’s hope. Thank you Sanaa!
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You’re welcome 💝
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I’m sure Luna, the largest of our cats and a hunter, has frightened any rabbits away. How I would love to see some in the garden, instead of moles! How sad that all that’s left is fur and ‘a scattering of chalky bones’.
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Yes, it is. Thank you, Kim.
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I don’t know what rabbits think about, but I’d like to share my bit of the afterlife with them and a patch of flowering meadow.
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I agree- thanks Jane!
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🙂
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A hare’s breath from perfect. Those of us that hiked wild places, we have chanced upon quite a few chalky bones. Actually, in time insects and weather
ingest and hide those bones. They say that’s why we cannot find remains of Sasquatch.
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Thank you Glenn!
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She was blessed with life, that’s what counts. Very poignant poem, Linda.
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Yes, it is. Thank you Lisa.
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You are welcome ❤
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This is so beautifully poignant with the imagery of wilting or death. The final few lines–wow, they were impactful! Dear poetess, you made me tear up a bit there. It made me think back to the outdoors when I was a child playing in the park with the grass, dirt and trees.
This poem is absolutely amazing, heartfelt with in-depth themes of mourning and perhaps fading away. Excellent, excellent piece here.
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Thank you so kindly Lucy.
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A delicate piece that captures a scene of the awe of life. So nicely done!
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Thank you!
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A sad tale, beautifully written.
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Thank you Beverly.
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Awesome, Linda. Felt it.
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Thank you.
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oh I’m sad!
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🙏🏻
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Oh, a tender sad write Linda
Much🦊love
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Thank you Gillena. Love to you!
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this is like a bramble thorn, the poor bunny demise scratched my heart
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Yes, thank you.
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you described life and death in 44 precise words, well done!
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Thank you!
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Beautiful Linda! Both the poem and the picture. A sad but beautiful tale!
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Thank you Dwight.
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Oh so sweet and sad 😢
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Thank you Christine.
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Aw, poor baby bunny. I have seen so many bunnies this year, the most I have ever seen
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Yes, but death is so much a part of life. Thanks for stopping by.
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So sad, but lovely.
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Thank you Judy.
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This is wonderful, Linda. Whether we imagine a rabbit or a person, it raises the question of what remains at the end of a life. Is it a mere shell, or a testament to the life it held?
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Thank you for your wonderful thoughts Ken. An important question to ponder.
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Very nice. One of the furry critters on my path this morning. Enjoyed your poem. It is reality.
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Thank you kindly.
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kaykuala
With those final dying breaths,
did her mind hasten her away
to the flowering meadow
The soul apparently has a way of deciding its direction in the afterlife. It is perhaps an appeal in mind hoping for the best!
Hank
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Yes, thank you Hank.
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I wouldnt wouldnt mind passing away so spiritually…..into the splendour of the universe beyond…
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Yes, it’s a lovely thought. Thank you.
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A lovely dedication to that little creature.
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Thank you.
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How sad….but also beautiful that this creature received such a touching tribute.
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Thank you Vivian.
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🙂
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i love the tender peace of your lines.
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Thank you.
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