Charmed Chaos
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Love Wine
Your sweet wine lingered
on my bruised lips when
the memory of our kiss
drenched in utter bliss
at last, opened love’s door.
©2018 Linda Lee Lyberg
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I liked the association of “wine” and “drenched” at the end. And the opening of love’s door.
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Thank you Frank!
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Must have been a wild night!
Dwight
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😊
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I love the way you’ve played with wine, bruised lips, kiss and drenched, Linda, to convey passion.
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Thank you Kim!
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The bruised lip seems to be a bit at odds with the love in this
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From passionate kissing? Perhaps another word would be better?
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I like the double meaning….
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Kiss drenched in bliss. This is such a beautiful write. Well done.
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Coming from you, high praise indeed! Thank you so much- I truly appreciate your words.
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Very passionate. I like the rhyme and all the “s” sounds are so sweet.
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Thank you!
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Ah love and wine. Always a combination that ignites!
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Yes, thank you!
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Perfect combination! is love and wine? or wine and love? 🙂
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Haha! One and the same- thank you!
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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