Musings on Life, Love, and Linguine-Poetry & Writing
“She didn’t quite know what the relationship was between lunatics and the moon, but it must be a strong one, if they used a word like that to describe the insane.”
― Paulo Coelho, Veronika Decides to Die
I drank the delicious moon one dark balmy night
as it flowed from the celestial blue sky,
An illuminated river of planets and nubulae
Tempted me with their moonlight madness.
The lustrous moon tasted of honeyed milk,
The bonbon planets oozed with dark chocolate
The nebulae, fragrant as crystalized ginger
Set my hungering afire with consuming desire.
And I became entangled and trapped
within this universe of delightful light,
a bodiless soul shimmering, in translucent air
floating among the stars and drinking the moon
Swimming in the insanity pool of my poetic mind.
©2021 Linda Lee Lyberg
dVerse Poets Pub: Making Much of Madness
MLMM: Photo Challenge #280
Brilliant and erudite lines to madness: “And I became entangled and trapped
within this universe of delightful light,”
Also you touch on that literal out of touch sense of dissociation – well wrought Linda and thanks for joining in with the prompt
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Thank you Laura!
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“The bonbon planets oozed with dark chocolate”
Now I am craving truffle guts. 🙂
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LOL! Go for it. 🙂
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I think you make the lunacy desirable, and maybe madness can be… that mania you feel before you slump back into darkness.
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Thank you Bjorn.
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Linda I really like how you describe poets as going to a “pool of insanity.” Space sounds so tantalizing and delicious, leaving sensibility behind.
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Thank you kindly Lisa.
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You are welcome, Linda.
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Ah, I love so many things about this, and most especially the delicious lines: The lustrous moon tasted of honeyed milk,
The bonbon planets oozed with dark chocolate
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Thank you Victoria!
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I like the many tastes you convey in this. The touches that go about describing insanity. Makes me long for my own pool of orang liqueur. I don’t care for chocolate.
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Lol! Thanks Toni.
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Beautiful read, I love your title, theme and it’s connection to lunacy, you’ve made something so ethereal seem so tangible.
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Thank you.
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Wondrous cosmic imagery… out of this world…..
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Thank you Ivor.
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There are several layers to this piece, part introspection, part joy ride. Interesting that we delved so deep into the madness, we went out-of-body / a bodiless soul/.
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Thank you Glenn.
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I like that concluding line, sometimes our thoughts can feel like a version of insanity. A great piece Linda.
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Thank you Michael!
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Things you wish you’d written yourself: I drank the moon.
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Thank you.
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I love a poem in which I can taste madness, Linda, and this is one! I love the way you feast on a delicious moon that tastes of honeyed milk in a universe of bonbon planets, dark chocolate and crystalised ginger – I’m more than happy to partake and become:
‘…entangled and trapped
within this universe of delightful light
…
Swimming in the insanity pool of my poetic mind.’
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Thank you Kim!
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Medievals were afraid of the moon — Paracelsus believed overexposure to moonlight bathed the mind in harmful entities he called ens, driving sane people to drunken careens. Its like the alcoholic with her hootch — to drink is to shout More. Your moon here is deliciously dangerous.
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Thank you Brendan!
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When I saw the title, I had to pop in and read. I’m so glad I did.
That was brilliant!
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Thank you!
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The moon is your muse! Drink deeply!
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Thank you Dwight.
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“Swimming in the insanity pool of my poetic mind.”
…I’m doing the dog paddle thinking everything’s fine!
This was luscious and beautiful Linda…
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Thank you Rob.
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Ah. Tempted by moonlight madness, and off you went “Swimming in the insanity pool of my poetic mind.” Good choice!
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Thank you so much.
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A deliciously luminous take on journeys of the mind, Linda
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Thank you Lynn.
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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