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Yes or Knot
Yes or Knot
-Linda Lee Lyberg
Let yes be knot
Unraveling
Ripping through negative strands
And knot the assembling
Of boulders slipping
Through my hands.
Copyright©2017
Linda Lee Lyberg
Paul hosts dVersetonight and want us to throw grammar overboard with inspiration from Gertrude Stein and ee cummings.
Author’s Note: Not sure about how many rules I broke, but I made the attempt!
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I love it. There are multiple meanings suggested to my eyes by the use of the word Knot. Very clever.
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Thank you!
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I think this is good.. hard to break rules… and the meaning comes through
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Many thanks!
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Unraveling / ripping / assembling / slipping… The contrasts and word usage are knot to be overlooked here! This is as intricate as a scout’s knot with layers of meaning slipped throughout.
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Thank you Jill!
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You are knot to be outdone! This is devilishly clever.
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Thank you Beverly!
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Clear, concise and clever. A fun read!
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There you are- thank you Charley!
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You are welcome!
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Nice and precise, tightly knotted and unravels clearly, Linda!
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Thank you!
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“Let yes be knot
Unraveling”
Wow. I love that.
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Thank you! I appreciate your kind words.
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I know knot from where you get your wonderful words! How are you ? 🙂
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Sometimes, I don’t either Vivian! This was total free fall. 😉 I am well, overall.
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It was scary forgetting all the grammar rules. Only when i read Stein- did I give myself permission 🙂
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Haha! Yes.
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I have a t- shirt with a saying that reads- “I am silently correcting your grammar.”😁
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hahaha!!
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🙂
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Clever use of each words and the knot suggest more meaning with in the poem itself Beautifully well done. 🙂
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Thank you so much for your insights!
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You’re welcome, friend.
Hope you stop by my page and read my post for dVerse.
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I certainly will!
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Yes yes and knot bad! Yeses and nots can both tie you into knots.
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Good one Mary! Thank you. 🙂
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I really like what you’ve done with the prompt here. So many times, the no, the not, is like a knot, unraveling. As someone else said, multiple meanings here….that negative person, that negative, pessimistic one, tied up in knots indeed.
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Thank you Lillian! So appreciate your kind words.
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