Yes or Knot

Posted on October 3, 2017 by

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Yes or Knot

-Linda Lee Lyberg

Let yes be knot

Unraveling

Ripping through negative strands

 

And knot the assembling

Of boulders slipping

Through my hands.

Copyright©2017
Linda Lee Lyberg

Paul hosts dVersetonight and want us to throw grammar overboard with inspiration from Gertrude Stein and ee cummings.
Author’s Note:  Not sure about how many rules I broke, but I made the attempt!
 
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30 Comments on “Yes or Knot”

  3. Unraveling / ripping / assembling / slipping… The contrasts and word usage are knot to be overlooked here! This is as intricate as a scout’s knot with layers of meaning slipped throughout.

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  11. I really like what you’ve done with the prompt here. So many times, the no, the not, is like a knot, unraveling. As someone else said, multiple meanings here….that negative person, that negative, pessimistic one, tied up in knots indeed.

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