Charmed Chaos
Musings on Life, Love, and Linguine-Poetry & Writing
#Tanka: Fear
By Linda Lee Lyberg
Fear is the cold snake
Slithering on your pale skin
Waiting in darkened corners
Hungering for your hot flesh.
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Linda Lee Lyberg
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Reblogged this on davidbruceblog.
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Whoa that describes it well!
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Very descriptive and creepy.
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Thank you so much. Appreciate you stopping by.
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That is fear, yikes ~
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Thank you.
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Love the simplicity of it. And the pic is delicious!
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Thanks Vivian!
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You’re welcome! By the way- I’ve found a form (new to me) that you may or may not know about; the Cherita……it’s so lovely. (allows my haiku to run free)…check it out. I found it on thotpurge.wordpress.com ‘s site.
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Oooh! Thanks, I’ll take a look.
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http://smellthecoffeeweb.blog/2017/11/03/paddy-fields/
I’ve just done one. Quite fun!
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It’s lovely! I will give it a try. Also, did you see the Shadorma challenge for November? This was a new one for me. https://alongtheinterstice.wordpress.com/shadorma-november/
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No, I didn’t – will have a look now :).. thanks !
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Absolutely!
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I learnt the Shadorma On Mick Talbot’s site… this looks really good though. Thanks for the intro 🙂
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They are quite fun…
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I love how you have described fear… very descriptive
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Beautifully haunting!
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Ohhhh… this is powerful. Well done. I love it! ❤
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Thank you Colleen! Hope your writing is going well. 😊
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Yes, thank you. I’m just now heading off. ❤
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Snakes are creepy. I would hate being the mouse fed alive to one.
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Me too Frank!
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That’s fear alright. Nicely done.
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Love that picture. Chilling.
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Thanks Sarah.
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