Musings on Life, Love, and Linguine-Poetry & Writing
Posted on January 4, 2018
by Linda Lee Lyberg
Category: PoetryTags: D'Verse Poets Pub, feather, silence, Spoken Word, wind
Delightful, Linda! I like your use of ellipses to show the pauses.
Thank you Frank- and I figured out how to use Soundcloud with my MAC, at last! I just added it to the post. Be gentle- my first reading.
Wonderful! I included my first audio in my post, too!
That was your first reading?!? Whoa! That was incredible!
Thank you Frank! You are too kind. 🙂
The ellipses work very well, especially when imagining the feather rising and swirling.
Wonderful sound cloud!
Oh my gosh- thank you Jill! My first and I thought- why not give it a go? Once I figured out the logistics on my MAC, I gave it a shot.
This carried me to exotic lands. Well done!
Thank you- I appreciate your kind words!
The feather came back gracefully.
Very well done. You managed in print what you did on your recording.
Thank you Charley!
I had sound taken off my computer as I find it distracting so I have no idea how you read. But, the poem is exquisite. The feather coming back gracefully is lovely. I prefer silence to people reading.
Thank you, I can understand your point. I am on the fence about it myself, but thought I would give it a shot.
Nothing ventured, nothing gained. I tried it once years ago during a poetry reading. Before it was my turn, I left. All the noise made my head hurt. There are some people with lovely voices and expression. But they are rare. I’m not saying you aren’t one of them. With no sound, I haven’t a clue. But I did so enjoy reading your poem…in silence.
I love your perspective- and wholly understand. Some things are better imagined in our own hearts than spoken.
A wonderful poem read by a wonderful poet! 😃💛
Thank you Walt!
You’re very welcome! ☺💛
Great! I love the idea of the feather taking on life. The story of our life…asking for things beyond ourselves only to be left with what we have. No more exotic land that a Woman!!
Lovely interpretation! Thank you Dwight.
How great of you to add a soundcloud… you really used the ellipses well.
Thank you for the follow.
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