Charmed Chaos
Musings on Life, Love, and Linguine-Poetry & Writing
He Calls
Stars tremble in lustrous waters
on a radiant moonlit night
capturing the quaking essence
of my soul’s divisive plight.
Come to me my sweetest love
I only feel the call of my name
burying itself deeper within
full of hot passionate flames
Mesmerized by an ethereal voice
singing a haunting love plea
As I fall, there is only cold wind
and the acrid taste of the salty sea.
©2018 Linda Lee Lyberg
Sarah host Poetics tonight with an excellent prompt. Finding emotions in concepts/things.
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How sad, separated from your lover by a chasm
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Yes.
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🙂
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I love you got that. 😊
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😃
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That first stanza really hooked me. I see uncertainty.
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Yes! Very much so.. thank you.
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Well done 😊💛
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Thanks Walt. 💛😊
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You’re welcome☺
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Sounds like the haunting call of one passed on calling you to come join him!
Dwight
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Very nice Dwight. Very adept observation. Thank you.
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I understand better after reading the comments (tried too hard to interpret the artwork). This is lovely and haunting…a poignant fall!
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Haha! Thank you Lynn!
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This was an awesome piece. A wonderful opening and with a perfect ending like an exclamation point.
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Thank you, it’s Andrew Right? I am happy you got it. I think some struggled with where/ what this was.
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Yes it is Andrew, unless you prefer Drew.
This was an excellent piece from start to finish. I hope you don’t mind me saying, your work is consistently on another level.
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I am so touched by your words, truly. Drew it is. I’m Linda, but you probably know that already. 🙂
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I meant every word Linda.
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Thank you. I believe you.
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Reminds me of the sirens’ songs.
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YES!! I was thinking that as well! Excellent Frank. Reading about mermen and mermaids right now.
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That call.. so often we have that shaft between.
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Yes. Thank you Bjorn.
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yearning…
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Very much so. Thank you!
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Ooh, I love that last stanza.
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Thank you!
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Reblogged this on The Militant Negro™.
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🙏🏻
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