Charmed Chaos
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Broken Wing
Image used with permission of the artist, Fay CollinsShe used to sway and dance
on the water’s grassy shore
where the waves ever lap
singing their lulling chord.
She flew among bright stars
their reflection undulating
on waves of the azure ocean
their beauty never abating.
And then one day a crack
sounded from dark skies
sending her soul careening
leaving her to wonder why.
As she lay dying in her watery grave
she remembers how once she swayed
and now with only one wing to unfurl
she soars to the light, as her life fades.
©2018 Linda Lee Lyberg
Sarah hosts dVerse tonight with a call for ekphrastic poems
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I like the “wondering why” with her “soul careening”.
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Thank you Frank. The painting spoke of sadness, and I loved it.
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Honored you liked it Drew. Thank you, my friend.
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Beautifully written. So sad. So well done Linda.
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Great post thanks for sharing
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Thank you. Happy you stopped by.
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This is so very poignant. You capture the painting beautifully – the broken wing, unable to soar. I hope she finds peace.
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Thank you Sarah. And thanks for introducing us to Fay’s beautiful work!
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It’s a pleasure. I’m hoping she will drop by and see what we’ve written!
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That would be lovely.
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Sad and beautiful. 🙂
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Thank you Penny.
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This is wonderful in its melancholy — well done!
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Thank you so much!
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I love the backstory of why there was only a feather left on the canvas ~ A sad ending you beautifully told ~
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Thank you Grace. I really appreciate your feedback.
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Oh, man. This is really sad. … But that light holds so much promise for new life and healing.
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Yes, thank you. Appreciate your kind words.
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Beautiful and sad, wonderful
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Thank you Kaylaann.
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I like the wondering why and her life ending so suddenly, so sadly. I chose the same picture.
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Ooh. I will have to pop over and read! Thanks Toni.
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Reblogged this on The Militant Negro™.
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Thank you my dear friend.
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This one would have worked for yesterday’s prompt as well. Love the way you gave life to the bird as she lingers between life and death.
Dwight
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Thank you Dwight. Always love to see you here.
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I enjoy reading your work, Linda!
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Thank you. You made me smile!
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Sad. So sad it brought tears.
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Yes, me too. I admit. 💛
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The broken wing… also make me think of Icarus
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Yes, that’s true. Thank you Bjorn.
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A melancholy but lovely write.
Anna :o]
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Thank you!
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Very sad. It fits my mood.
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Thank you. But sorry you are down.
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Thank you. My Mom recently passed away.
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I am so very sorry. I lost mine almost 7 years ago. It’s hard without her. I wish I could tell you it gets easier, but it doesn’t. You learn to get through it and find joy where you can.
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Hi. I have tried to reply and thank you, but I kept getting “Reply failed. Try again”. I hope this one goes through and I hope you didn’t get twenty copies of my previous attempts. Thank you for your kind thought.
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Yes, received it. Take care.
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I loved that painting too. Nice work.
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Thank you Sarah! Yes, that one jumped out at me and said- pick me.
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