Haiku: Sand
Posted on May 14, 2018
by Linda Lee Lyberg
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where two once walked now there’s one
©2018 Linda Lee Lyberg
Chèvrefeuille has challenged us to create a “fusion haiku” from the following two:
on the field
where evening has died out,
my footsteps
the heart
that seeks something
I release to the sea
© Ozaki Hosai (revised by Chèvrefeuille)
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Nicely done
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Thank you Andrew.
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Oh, you hurt my sentimental side with this lovely poem! It was delightful!
xoxo
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Thank you! 😘
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Oh how sad but then sometimes walking alone is part of our soul’s journey.
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Yes, it certainly is.
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Reblogged this on The Militant Negro™.
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Thank you. 😊🙏🏻💛
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What a beauty … full of sentimental feelings.
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Thank you! I appreciate you reading, truly.
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet and commented:
Come and read the message carried in Linda’s – HAIKU SAND
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Thank you.
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