The Boat
Posted on June 24, 2018
by Linda Lee Lyberg
39 Comments
I sat amidst the gnarled roots of an ancient tree
watching water flow to and fro and all at once
I caught a glimpse of poetry floating softly by.
It was but a tiny poem of bustling minnows and young trout
trying to catch the short-lived mayflies flying all about
in the whispering summer breeze.
I closed my eyes and listened to the rippling stream,
waiting for the perfect words to come
to justify this beautiful scene.
At last my muse spoke, so I picked up my pencil and wrote
a poem of a Monarch butterfly
who grew weary of flapping his wings,
so he found a buoyant maple leaf and it became his boat.
He sailed where the mountain stream took his slapdash vessel
sunning his vibrant wings as the warm golden sun rose and set.
At night, he marveled at the phases of the silvery moon
he heard the plaintive howls of the timber wolves
and knew the end of his journey was coming all too soon.
For butterflies, like people never live forever
in fact their life so brief, so few of them even try
to soar beyond their migrating journey,
as did this brave, gypsy soul butterfly.
©2018 Linda Lee Lyberg
Author’s Note: Today’s prompt took me on a fanciful journey.
Loved the way you opened this. Great from start to finish.
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Thank you Andrew! So happy you enjoyed it.
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I totally enjoyed this butterfly’s journey, bobbing along on his leaf. Your imagery is wonderful, such a lovely read.
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Thank you! I am happy you enjoyed it.
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Ah, I love your inspiration and where it took you. Your poem just flows – or should I say it flies on monarch’s wings!
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Thank you so much!
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I wish I could close my eyes too, whilst reading this….beautiful!
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Thank you Vivian. I am so happy you enjoyed my words.
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Loved it!
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😊
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The whimsical rhythm of this is such fun journey! ❤
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Thank you. I would venture to say it’s very ‘unHarrison like’ but it’s where the prompt took me.
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Where the prompt takes us is all that matters for there is already one Harrison and we are to show our unique beauty as poets! 🙂
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Yes, so true. Thank you!
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I agree a lovely opening and it morphed into a delightful ending just like a butterfly emerging from its cocoon!
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Thank you so much!
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I love the brave butterfly sailor… wonder how he wondered at stars
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Ah yes, the lovely stars. Thank you Bjorn.
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I like how the poem switches from observer by the tree to being part of the butterfly’s journey – all it saw in that short lifetime and intriguingly how it ended up on water instead of its elemental air
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Thank you Laura. I truly appreciate your thoughts.
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As a “Pond Sitter and an occasional fisherman” this was a wonderful “fanciful journey””.
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Thank you! I am so touched by your words.
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Once again i could see the flowing water and hear the sounds of a beautiful mountain brook as i read this beautiful piece. Thank you for the memories it brought back to me. ☺❤
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Ah Walt. Thank you for sharing. ❤️😊
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My pleasure Linda :)<3
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What a way to travel – on a leaf boat! Charming…
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Thank you! I’m happy you enjoyed it.
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“It was but a tiny poem of bustling minnows” — I like that a lot.
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Thank you!
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Glad to see y’all are carrying on with 28 Days!
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Yes, indeed we are!
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Yes, I love that opening and where it went at the end.
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Thank you! I appreciate your kind words.
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What a delightful journey you took us on, too!
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Thank you!
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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The atmosphere and beauty in this writing is gorgeous!
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Thank you kindly!
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