#Tan Renga: Lightning Flash

lightning flash–
what I thought were faces
are plumes of pampas grass

© Basho (Tr. unknown; taken from “The Small Road Into The Deep North”)

swaying in turbulent wind
they dance in the startling light

©2019 Linda Lee Lyberg

Carpe Diem Haiku Kai: Tan Renga Challenge Lightning Flash

3 Comments on “#Tan Renga: Lightning Flash

  1. Nice the way you continued the action of the grass.
    Thanns for dropping by to read mine


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