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#Troiku: Rainbow Clouds
sea cliffs beckoning
tempting with fragrant flowers
rainbow clouds drifting
sea cliffs beckoning
following winding shoreline
waves crash against rock
resplendent fragrant flowers
lush greens and scented blooms
a walk in heaven
rainbow clouds drifting
sheaves of sunlight peeking through
God’s painted canvas
©2021 Linda Lee Lyberg
Author’s Note: For the weekend meditation, we have been given two haiku with which to create a ‘fusion’ haiku. We are then to create a Troiku from the fusion haiku. Below are the two haiku:
coming to sea cliffs
the off-shore breeze raises
a flower fragrance
curving with the land
a rainbow of clouds
moves out to sea
© Jane Reichhold (Taken from: “A Dictionary of Haiku”, a Modern Saijiki)
Carpe Diem Weekend Meditation #88 Sea Cliffs
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Nicely done fusion that includes the essence of the origin haiku and leads into a wonderful troiku.
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Thank you Ken!
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Wonderful last line, “God’s painted canvas” , beautiful!
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Thank you!
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Wonderful Troiku. I like the line “God’s painted canvas” … such a wonderful line to close this beauty.
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Thank you!
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