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#Triolet: Rebirth
Tiny seeds lie in wait for spring
As gentle rains soak mother earth
In budding trees, mockingbirds sing
While the seeds lie in wait for spring
Butterflies emerge, taking wing
When the land prepares for rebirth
Tiny seeds lie in wait for spring
As gentle rains soak mother earth
©2020 Linda Lee Lyberg
dVerse Poets Pub: Almost a Triolet
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A much appreciated breath of Spring!
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Thank you!
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It’s happening 🙂
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Yes!
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Oh how I love the photo you used, the seed with its little casing cap. I like the gentle nature of your triolet. The seeds wait and know when to make their appearance.
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Yes, they do. Thanks Lisa!
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Nice description of spring. I like the tie between earth and rebirth.
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Thank you!
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I love the feel of your poem with the seeds underground pushing to come forth as soon as the sun shines and warms them.
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Thank you!
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Hi Linda, Like this piece. A challenge to all of us, can we write a poem a poem about spring without using “rebirth”? What metaphor could communicate this without needing that word?
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Interesting question. I suppose one could if you are not using a strict rhyme form like the Triolet.
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wow you really mastered this style and love your pic!
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Thank you!
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Beautiful on every level.
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Thank you Paul.
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Most welcome Linda
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Lovely ❤
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thanks Chuck!
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Always happy to read and share your words, Linda!!
xoxo
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xoxo 💖🌹
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Oh, the spring… such a rejuvenation… wonderful
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Thank you!
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Beautiful breath of spring here! 🙂
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Thank you Lillian!
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