Musings on Life, Love, and Linguine-Poetry & Writing
“So, this is it?”
“Yes, this is it.”
As she gives me the heart shaped stone, her fingers caress my palm. There is no mistaking the spark of electricity that surges and warms my calloused hand. I look into her blue-black eyes, startled by the rush of blood.
“Are you sure this will work Maia? This looks to be nothing more than a common stone.”
“Do you doubt me? Are you sure about this?”
I hang my head to hide tears. “Yes. I can’t go on without her.”
“Very well. When the village clock strikes twelve on the eve of the full harvest moon, bury the stone in her grave. She will rise within three days time, but I warn you, she will be different.”
Her warning echoes in my grief stricken heart as we go in different directions down the imperturbable street.
©2020 Linda Lee Lyberg
dVerse Poets Pub: Prosery Different Directions
Linda Lee Lyberg is a wife, mother, artist, published poet and author. She resides in Mesa, AZ with her husband Pete (aka The Big Viking) of 24 years, and her dog, Ricky Bobby. Linda writes various forms of poetry, as well as short stories. You can read more of her works at: charmedchaos.com
and purchase anthologies containing her work here: Amazon Author Page
I’m always torn between fiction and non-fiction for Prosery prompts, but I’m glad you chose to go with fiction, Linda! The heart-shaped stone drew me in – I have several, some of which we found on the beach when we lived on the coast, as well as a rose quartz – and magic. Maia’s warning reminded me of the story of ‘The Monkey’s Paw’ by W.W. Jacobs.
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Thank you so much Kim.
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Oooo! Excellent. I also liked the detail of the heart-shaped stone. I want a sequel.
We just finished watching a series called The Ghost Bride on Netflix (Taiwanese-Malaysian) where people are going in and out of “the Netherworld.”
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I’ll have to check it out. Thanks Merril!
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It’s another weird Merril find. So, it might not be something you like. 😀 It’s not really scary, sort of more of an adventure/romance.
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This brings back the memory of reading Harry Potter and the story of the three brothers… especially this: … but I warn you, she will be different.
The grief finding it out will be worse than the first loss.
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I think so too.
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An interesting use of a heart-shaped stone.
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Thank you Frank.
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I want to read more! 🙂
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Yay!
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Truly chilling, Linda! Reminds me of old Vincent Price movie plots. I can see his face now as his beloved rises from her resting place….
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Thank you Lisa!
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You are welcome. My pleasure!
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I wonder what she’ll be like when she finally returns
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I’m guessing not so great. 😉
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This was wonderful though I fear no good comes from bring the dead back…
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True! Thank you.
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Beautiful: magical and mysterious.
Happy Monday
much❧✿❧love
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Thank you!
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Excellent write! Leaving the reader wondering how she’s changed!
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Thank you Beverly.
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Leaves one wondering in what way she will be different. Very nice cliff hanger
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Thank you kindly.
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We can’t resurrect the past, even with magic. I like the open end. (K)
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Thank you!
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Mesmerizing, beautiful, amazing write.
Looking forward to read more.
Great writing
😊
And one more thing
This is the link of my new poem.
Do check .
I hope you like it
https://savouringlucidity.wordpress.com/2020/06/07/empire/#more-145
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A spooky careful-what-you-wish-for set up. Such a shame there’s a word limit, seems like we all want to know what happens next…
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Yes, even I! Thank you.
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Something tells me that street will be quite perturbed when all is said and done.
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Haha! Yes.
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Once resurrected, how can one remain the same?
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Oooo, I really enjoyed this. Makes me want to keep reading and see how she is different. Love the use of the old thing of resurrection changing a person with the prompt
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Thank you so much.
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Great fun to read, Linda.
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Thank you!
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Eerie and magical. Love this writing, LInda!
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Thank you kindly.
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