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#Tanka: Mesmerized
“As if you were on fire from within.The moon lives in the lining of your skin.”
― Pablo Neruda
To glimpse the divine
As I fall under the spell
Of golden brown eyes
Mesmerized, I surrender
As passionate fires ignite
©2020 Linda Lee Lyberg
Colleen’s Weekly Poetry Challenge: No. 186 #Synonyms only
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Beautifully done!
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Thanks Vivian!
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This is gorgeous Linda
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Thank you!
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My pleasure
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Wow! Your quote is breathtaking and so is your tanka, Linda. I do love what you did with the prompt words, very sensual! ❤
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Thank you Colleen!
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Reblogged this on Where Genres Collide Traci Kenworth YA Author & Book Blogger for all Genres as well as craft books and commented:
Like this, Linda!
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I have always loved the word mesmerize. Not sure why. You use it so perfectly.
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Thank you!
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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