Musings on Life, Love, and Linguine-Poetry & Writing
“In sorrow we must go, but not in despair. Behold! we are not bound for ever to the circles of the world, and beyond them is more than memory.”
― J.R.R. Tolkien
Every feather falling
from a stormy sky
another soul transforms
into a different life
No longer are they calling
Sweet hellos and long good-byes
But caught in their own firestorms
Reliving their deeds with strife
Their voices now are whispering
In lonesome sorrowful sighs
Amidst booming thunderstorms
Floating into an afterlife
But soon quiet comes after howling storms
when they evolve into magnificent light
©2022 Linda Lee Lyberg
dVerse Poets Pub: Poetics
This story of death and birth, with the imagery of feathers falling really goes from darkness into some kind of hope…. lovely.
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Thank you so much Bjorn.
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I love that image of ‘every feather falling’ – it’s so gentle and romantic, yet somehow haunting. A beautiful poem, Linda!
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Thank you!
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This is incredibly deep and poignant, Linda! I especially resonate with; “Sweet hellos and long good-byes/But caught in their own firestorms.” Thank you so much for adding your voice to the prompt, mon amour 💝💝
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Thank you for an incredible prompt. ❤️😊
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So much wisdom in the metaphors! Enjoyed!! 💞
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Thank you!
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💓
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Exquisite your stepping through spiritual and corporeal metamorphosis.
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Thank you Lisa.
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You’re very welcome.
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I love the couplet wrap-up. Profoundly crafted. Well done, indeed.
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Thank you so much.
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Such a lovely poem, and you utilized the form so impressively! And such hope in the closing couplet.
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Thank you!
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A great poem Linda. Love the metaphors of the feather and thunder and light! Well done with the form.
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Thank you!
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I love that hope and optimism with the envoi lines Linda.
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Thank you Grace.
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So much said in such soft, lovely words…
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Thank you kindly.
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I agree with Lisa – “Exquisite”
❤
David
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Thank you David.
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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This is so lovely, Linda. I love the image of the feathers falling, and the transformations–cycles of life.
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Thank you Merril.
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You’re welcome!
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I enjoyed the imagery and the rhythm.
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Thank you!
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Love the image of the feathers falling.
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