Within My Arms
Posted on February 1, 2018
by Linda Lee Lyberg
32 Comments
Oh, beloved please abide within my arms
you are safe and secure so lie, within my arms.
Come ride the turbulent wind inside of me
throw caution aside and be, within my arms.
The bluest of moons with tempting love songs
trying to woo but you belong, within my arms.
Please forsake her, come to our warm bed
make sweet love to me instead, within my arms.
For here is where beautiful forever resides
come to me I will not deny, you within my arms.
©2018 Linda Lee Lyberg
Author’s Note: This is my first attempt at a Ghazal. In Spanish my first name Linda, means beautiful, hence the last line stanza reference.
Originally an Arabic verse form dealing with loss and romantic love, medieval Persian poets embraced the ghazal, eventually making it their own. Consisting of syntactically and grammatically complete couplets, the form also has an intricate rhyme scheme. Each couplet ends on the same word or phrase (the radif), and is preceded by the couplet’s rhyming word (the qafia, which appears twice in the first couplet). The last couplet includes a proper name, often of the poet’s. In the Persian tradition, each couplet was of the same meter and length, and the subject matter included both erotic longing and religious belief or mysticism. [Source: Poetry Foundation]
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A commendable first attempt Lynda. I love the theme which is held beautifully by the refrain. Thanks for playing.
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Thank you for the challenge, and the feedback.
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It’s a tough form, especially if you opt for the option of a rhyme scheme alongside the refrain. You did a great job. Like many forms it is evolving and being reshaped to suit English.
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It’s interesting and yes, tough!
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Great ghazal premier, Linda! I love the exuberence of love in it! Wonderful work!
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Thank you Frank!
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😇
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Good job and I love the feel that the picture gives!
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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.
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Leaves one with a romantic, cozy feeling.
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Thank you!
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Reblogged this on The Militant Negro™.
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😊😘
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I like the suggestion to forsake the moon and ride the turbulent wind
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Thank you Frank!
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet and commented:
Come savor the beautiful love poem “Within My Arms” and learn about a new form of poetry too!
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Thank you!
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It was my pleasure!
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Quite lovely Linda!
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Thank you Penny!
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A song of passionate love and how clever to work in your ‘signature’ at the end.
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Thank you so much! I appreciate you stopping by.
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Swooningly romantic!
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Thank you!
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A passionate and beautiful love ghazal, Linda!
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Thank you Kim!
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The moon is a formidable one to compete… but soon it’s waning…
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Yes, indeed.
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Well done! You have captured that irresistible romantic feeling that carries all the way to the end.
Dwight
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Thank you Dwight. Appreciate your kind words. 😊
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Very romantic!
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Thank you!
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