Charmed Chaos
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The Break
My last words, whispered with bated breath
before you turned and left
leaving me alone and broken
like a fallen egg from a robin’s nest.
No goodbyes, only brief words hurled
as you disappeared
per chance we’ll meet again my love
in another world.
©2018 Linda Lee Lyberg
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Charmed Chaos 
I like the descriptiveness of this line: “like a fallen egg from a robin’s nest”
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Thank you Frank.
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So sad and pensive but beautiful! Loved the way you captured the emotions of a breakup!
xoxo
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Thank you Chuck. Sometimes, we tap into past, yes?
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I love “No goodbyes, only brief words hurled”… it gives the feeling that all is not lost 💜
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Thank you for you kind words.
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There’s hope in the end, a big chance, maybe if. The doors are not closed.
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Yes, thank you Grace.
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How sad and regretful… leaving you a shell of your former self? 🙂 Well done!
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Thank you Charley. I appreciate your kind words.
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The last line leaves me wondering what would happen at your next encounter. I like the mystery of it
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Thank you. I am happy I left a question.
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Charmed chaos at work
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😊 Haha- yes indeed.
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🙂
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Such sad words, yet beautiful in their own tragic way.
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Thank you. I am happy you enjoyed it.
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I would tell the speaker of your poem to forget the idiot (LOL). Beautifully woven 🙂
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Haha! Exactly Vivian…😊
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🙂
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Hearts are fragile like robins’ eggs…beautifully sad.
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Yes, they are.
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Sad parting as you feel yourself falling your shell cracking as you hit the sidewalk! Very Vivid!
Dwight
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Yes, thank you Dwight. I always value your insight. Truly.
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Thanks!
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So very sad. The birds do not always survive once the egg falls from the nest.
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I know.
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Lost love encapsulated in in that wonderfully expressive simile ‘like a fallen egg from a robin’s nest’. I could almost hear the shell of your heart break. Lovely, Linda!
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Thank you Kim. I appreciate your kind words.
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Good comparison for the broken heart….cracked and fragile indeed.
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Thank you Lillian.
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“My last words, whispered with bated breath” – so much in these words. We do try (sometimes) one last time knowing it is not going to make any difference.
And, the closing lines gives so much hope.
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Thank you. Your words mean so much to me.
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Or perhaps one would not want to meet again….with all those hurled words.
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Yes, so true. Thank you!
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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