Two as One
Posted on May 25, 2018
by Linda Lee Lyberg
32 Comments
placing a passionate kiss
Capture the flowered moon
on your pink stained lips
Wrapping with a faithful garland
Red roses,white lilies, rosemary
your fragrance overwhelms
I will follow you into eternity
as the scent of love surrounds me
Painting the vast universe
with the colors of a rainbow
©2018 Linda Lee Lyberg
Author’s Note: Paul is hosting at d’Verse tonight and has asked us to write a contrapuntal poem. Essentially a contrapuntal is the combining of two separate poems. Both poems are mine. They can be read separately, or together. This is my first time to try this form.
Reblogged this on The Militant Negro™.
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🙏🏻💛🌺🍄💋
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🤗🌹😎🌷🥀🍫🍫🍫🎈
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I think you did a wonderful job.! I love rainbows!
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Thank you. I appreciate your comments.
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🙂 you are welcome
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🙂
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As lovely as a rainbow
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Thanks Andrew, much appreciated.
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These poems are amazing, separate and together. This was a hard prompt for me.
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Thank you. It was challenging.
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I liked this line: “staining my own to match”
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Thank you Frank. This was my first time to attempt this!
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Beautiful ☺❤
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Thank you Walt! ❤️😘
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You are very welcome! 🙂❤️
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🙂
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Good one keep going..👍
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Thank you. Happy you enjoyed it.
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You are welcome.😊
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A superb weaving of two into one…love’s muse showed the way. Brilliant.
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Thank you Paul. Your comment makes me smile!
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Two into one–I like best the full lines read together. Such romance!
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Thank you!
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A perfect courtship and marriage ……in this fusion 🙂
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Thank you Vivian. I appreciate your kind comments.
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Capture the flowered moon on your pink stained lips….
beautiful love poem all three ways
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Thank you so much!
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Thank you! I appreciate your kind words.
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Loved this! Great format! Almost like a call and response duet?
xoxo
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I would say similar. The actual name is contrapuntal poem- a new one for me!
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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