Sweet Bitter
Posted on June 27, 2018
by Linda Lee Lyberg
19 Comments
Love, like the bright moon
waxes and wanes in the breath
flourishing in all seasons
The bright moon, like love
warms and cools in the embrace
soaking in golden sun’s rays
to shine pure light from within
the time for every season’s
sweet pleasure or bitter pain
This is a beautiful comparison between love and the moon. I enjoyed reading it.
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Thank you!
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A beautiful comparison between love and the moon…..the changing of seasons…of day to night. Knowing when to reign…and when to slowly fade or suddenly be clouded over and disappear. Well done. So glad you posted to the prompt. The illustration is also very good!
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Thank you Lillian!
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Nice description of the moon: “soaking in golden sun’s rays
to shine pure light from within”
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Thank you Frank!
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So beautiful! The moon is my favorite, gives so much inspiration.
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Lovely writing!
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Thank you!
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I like how the moon brings in the rays of the sun, but makes them her own, just as the lover circles within the orbit of her beloved, but emanates a unique spectrum in that push and pull. Lovely, thank you.
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Thank you! I am so happy you enjoyed it.
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Love and the moon – a potent combination and wonderful analogy of seasons and relationships ~
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Thank you Grace. I appreciate your kind thoughts.
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Yes, the moon and love are a potent combination. This was so beautifully written, Linda.
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Indeed they are. Thank you Andrew.
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Sweet pleasure or bitter pain.. The question of the ages. I really like this poem. ❤☺
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Thank you Walt. ❤️😊
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My pleasure ☺
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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