Autumn Essence
Posted on September 9, 2018
by Linda Lee Lyberg
43 Comments
Tasting golden sun of Autumn on
these trembling lips, soothing my soul
spectral shadows dance with light
sweet apple butter spread
on steamy hot spice muffins
as essence of cinnamon fills
air with aroma of coming home
©2018 Linda Lee Lyberg
Photo by Viktor Mogilat on Unsplash
I have chosen to write a reverse Nonet, whose syllable count is 9-8-7-6-5-4-3-2-1-1-2-3-4-5-6-7-8-9
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Beautiful romantic imagery!
burnt
umber
bronze shades in
orange marmalade
I love that!
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Thank you so much!
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My pleasure!
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Such wonderful imagery, makes me taste Fall and be eager for it to come!
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Thank you. I am thrilled you enjoyed it!
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It was wonderful! 🙂
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😊
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Oh my god this is absolutely breathtaking! 😍😍 Love, love, love, “burnt umber bronze shades in orange marmalade”.. wow! ❤️
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Thank you Sanaa. Your words are too kind.
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Love this, I’m really looking forward to all the shades of fall…
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Yes, so am I. What little we get here in the Southwest!
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I love your delicious reverse nonet, Linda. I especially like the internal and half-rhymee in the lines:
‘bronze shades in
orange marmalade
honey on wheat toast
sweet apple butter spread
on steamy hot spice muffins’.
The essence of coming home!
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Thank you Kim. I’m happy you enjoyed it.
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This is lovely – the food you describe feels like autumn! Marmalade like the leaf-colours.
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Thank you!
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What a delight to read, now I had better check to see what I have to eat, you have made me hungry.
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Haha! Thank you.
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What a simply gorgeous autumn poem, with the flavours seeming at first like metaphors for the colours and then clearly the essence of autumn in their own right. And a nice way of turning the poem at the one-syllable centre lines. Love it!
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Thank you kindly.
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I mostly do free verse but this reverse nonet is calling my name. I love the images you’ve created within the structure of the poem. It stimulates the eyes as well as the ears and the tongue. True talent in your words!
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Thank you so much. You should try it!
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Autumn, beautiful autumn, from cloud-breath to apple butter. Love, love.
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Thank you!
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Here in Alabama, it’s a little early for my soul to be soothed, but your poem is the next best thing. I really like it.
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Thank you so much! It’s still warm here in AZ as well, but a girl can dream.
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A beautiful reflection of the sweet taste of autumn- rich with flavour😊
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Thank you Vivian.
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😊
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Ah, this is so sensory — the colors, the smells, the food, et al. create such a wonderful setting. I also loved the dance of the spectral shadows and the light in the whispering wind. A delightful read.
-HA
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Thank you HA.
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I will come home to that!
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Thank you!
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You have characterized autumn homecoming SO well! Wonderful tastes and smells.
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Thank you so much. I appreciate your kind words.
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An incredible reverse Nonet! I could see, hear and smell every word! Wonderful! 🙂❤️
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Thank you my sweet friend! ❤️😊
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My pleasure 🙂❤️
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❤️
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What a beautiful capture of Autumn’s essence.
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Thank you. I appreciate your kind thoughts.
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Thanks my friend. xoxoxo
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