#Troiku: Autumn Rain Falling

autumn rain falling
walking under dripping trees
every leaf glistens

autumn rain falling
soaking the dry rose garden
drenched blossoms bowing

walking under dripping trees
drops trickling down my neck
cold morning shivers

every leaf glistens
diamonds shine in hazy sun
before clouds return

©2021 Linda Lee Lyberg

Carpe Diem #1784- Soaking wet (Crossroads) : Our challenge is to create a ‘fusion ‘haiku from the following haiku, and then write a Troiku with the fusion- ku.

soaking wet
I can’t read the letters
on the signpost

walking through
the bush clover, the pampas grass,
walking on through them

© Santoka Taneda

3 Comments on “#Troiku: Autumn Rain Falling”

1. Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.

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   • Thank you!

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     • Happy to share this, My Dear!
       xoxo 😊💖

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