Charmed Chaos
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#Gogyohka: Jewel in the Sky
chorus of raucous birds
singing at once
high above the mesquite
emerald jeweled hummingbird hovers
glistening in the morning sun
©2020 Linda Lee Lyberg
dVerse Poets Pub: MTB 5 Line Japanese Poetry Forms
Linda Lee Lyberg is a wife, mother, artist, published poet and author. She resides in Mesa, AZ with her husband Pete (aka The Big Viking) of 24 years, and her dog, Ricky Bobby. Linda writes various forms of poetry, as well as short stories. You can read more of her works at: charmedchaos.com
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I love the evocative images in your gogyohka, Linda! They sing of Spring, and the freshness of a new day!
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Thank you Frank.
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I feel Mesa in this one … very nice. Happy weekend.
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Thank you!
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That emerald jeweled hummingbird is very colorful.
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Thank you Frank.
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Another jewell!
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Thank you Jane.
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🙂
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What a lovely word capture, Linda. I think I heard the chirp of that hummingbird. ❤
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Thank you Colleen!
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It’s a great pleasure. ❤
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They are such incredible tiny miracles, silently sipping nectar ignoring those raucous fellows.
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Yes, they are.
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kaykuala
emerald jeweled hummingbird hovers
glistening in the morning sun
Yes, Linda, in these trying times there may be a silver lining somewhere nearby!
Hank
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Yes, thank you!
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Lovely half-rhymes here too: raucous – chorus; emerald – jewelled; hummingbird-hovers. There’s a lot squeezed into these five lines.
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Thank you!
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It must be an amazing sight!
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Yes!
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