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#Haiku 11: Drift & Air

Mind flying

Butterflies drifting

In tune with the wafting air

Floating not fighting.

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Linda Lee Lyberg

 

 

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2 thoughts on “#Haiku 11: Drift & Air

  1. Wow! Haikus generally aren’t my favorite poetic subgenre — they’re pretty, but generally insubstantial. But you have transcended the genre’s limitations with this one and made it one of my favorite examples — a haiku with both the beauty of nature AND a deep message to glean. Well done!

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