Tanka: A Beautiful Mess
Posted on April 14, 2018
by Linda Lee Lyberg
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cool Spring breezes whispering
under bright stars canopy
sway my darling, to our song.
bending it with our magic
fusing two hearts with this play
cavorting the night away.
limbs entwined on dewy grass
passion’s ballet as evening’s
©2018 Linda Lee Lyberg
I love it! “Come frolic my love”… Playful!! ☺❤
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Thank you Walt! 😊💛😘
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My pleasure Linda! I really enjoyed it. 😀😇
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☺️❤️
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I agree with Walt. What a great opening line. This was beautiful
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Thank you Drew! You make this writer smile.
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Good
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This is so lovely
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Thank you. I am happy you enjoyed it!
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I really did. 💕
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Makes my heart sing. 😊
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Linda, this is a fabulous triple Tanka. It tells a story and I love that. Each Tanka leads into the next one. This is excellent!! ❤
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Thank you so much for your kind words Colleen. I so appreciate them.
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What an excellent poem. I loved it. ❤
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That makes me happy!
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Oh, that’s nice. I like the melting, fusing hearts idea – I used it, too, in my poem. 🙂
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Great minds!
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That is beautiful! I love the way it flows straight into your minds eye! Great job & have a nice day!
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Thank you! I appreciate your kind words. You too!
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