Middle Watch
Posted on August 8, 2018
by Linda Lee Lyberg
22 Comments
And in the middle watch hours, Loneliness cries out your name
as I reach for the cold pillow where your head once lay.
Your voice I dread, for it haunts my thoughts
I cannot bear to bring to the fore,
for fear the heartache overtakes and breaks.
So Sadness comes to call, dressed in her mourning clothes
dragging along her sisters, Anguish and Grief
and so they sit, lingering…
for they know it won’t be long until the thief appears.
Too soon, the wait is over as she flies in on a raven’s wings,
Misery comes a calling, carrying her burden of shimmering tears
and with them all surrounding, Loneliness is relieved.
©2018 Linda Lee Lyberg
Jilly is hosting
d’Verse and asks that we write of Things Unseen.
Simply wonderful personification; excellent take on the unseen!
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Thanks much Jill. I’m happy you liked it!
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I adore the last stanza.
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Thank you! I’m happy you enjoyed it.
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Wow. I’m in love with this! Seriously! ☺❤
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Thank you Walt! 😊❤️
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My pleasure Linda 🙂 ❤
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😊❤️
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A somber crew indeed! Well conceived. I love the personification!
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Thank you Charley.
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You are welcome!
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Sadly, we can all identify with this. Beautifully written.
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Thank you Glenda. I appreciate your kind thoughts. Love to you.
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Nice sound and nice line: “for fear the heartache overtakes and breaks.”
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Thank you Frank.
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Amazing. Loved the stanza that began So sadness. It was wonderful from start to finish
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Thank you Andrew. Really appreciate your kindness.
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Loneliness relieved by… (wait for it)… MISERY???!!! Alas, that seems to be the true order of thangs. lovely poem, I had one of those Middle Watch nights last night, relating to this one all too much. Hey, Bjorn also wrote about Loneliness, we need to get these two poems together. 😉 Really, this one strikes spot on. Thank you.
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Thank you so much.
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Wow, this poem takes my breath away. Sometimes misery and tears do make you feel less lonely.
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Thank you. I will cherish your words.
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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